Vision-less

I wish I 

had not looked,

for now I 

cannot 

see

Reviews

[Cassie]

not looked at what? I am literally thinking and reading this literally

[John the Baptist]

A brief offering that tells a truth. There are some sights we are not ready to see, and they can hurt us. Don't rush things.

[willweb]

Thanks so much for stopping by to read.

[Fran Marie]

blinded by the blight
sometimes we do see the
whole picture and wish
we hadn't..

nice write here

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Fran Marie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like the layout of the poem...like a top, pivoting, spinning....seeing what we don't want to see,
almost like turning back and looking at Sodom and Gomorrah...and turning to salty tears.
j.

[willweb]

Thanks again, I hadn't caught the design but I do now.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Oh, boy, I really love this! This was actually, quite creepy and chilling. But it could be interpreted as so much and that's one of the reasons it's so good. Short, but truly great and mind-capturing.

[willweb]

Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it.