If You Ask Me

 

I can’t believe you just danced on a mountain

Fashioned a sail from a butterfly’s wing

Sipped on a cup filled with smiles from the fountain

Stood in the garden before it was spring

 

Climbed up a staircase that led to tomorrow

Painted the sun in a deep shade of blue

Gave back the blessings you thought you could borrow

Sent to the old every wish of the new

 

Carved out a poem in tree bark illusion

Swung from a bridge as the river ran dry

Started the end with a forgone conclusion

Welcomed a friend with a hearty good bye

 

When was the last time you acted this funny

Thinking the stars would all fall from above

Even in rain all your eyes see is sunny

If you ask me I would say you’re in love

Author's Note

Just for fun....

Reviews

[Gee]

What a thoroughly enjoyable read,great rhyming and flow.Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet,Will

[willweb]

Thanks so much Gee. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

[DoormanDan]

I really like the line "Welcomed a friend with a hearty good bye", that's a really nice one there! This poem has a lot of interesting vocab and has a pleasant atmosphere to it. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the fantastic work! :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Dan. My pen was in a good mood when I wrote this. :)

[ANTO]

Phew - that is one very energetic lover Will - I got knackered just seeing their escapades - love can make us into superman/woman
This is really fun and quite the tonic - thank you for the RR !! :)

[willweb]

Thank you my good friend for your nice words. Yep, love sure does seem to give us superhuman strength. Leaping tall buildings and such. :)

[ANTO]

Ha - that reminds me of the movie 'My Super ex-girlfriend'
lol
great craic Will

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

VERY UNIQUE
I admire your creative flair inside this one, and the message, too.
Thanks!
:)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Josie for your kind words today. I am happy this one touched you.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

:) Very nice write!

[Tiana]

Just for fun? :) I thought it was absolutely beautiful! You do have a way with words, Will ...

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Island Woman. Well, it was fun to write and I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Tiana]

You are welcome and I enjoyed it tremendously :)

[katja]

this reads like a breath of fresh air...
... a lovely whimsical piece, will
*
thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina

[willweb]

Thanks so very much miss m. I just wanted to have a little lighthearted poetic fun. I an happy you liked this one.

[Cool Girl]

This is amazing!! Seriously, you're work is amazing! This is going in my favorites!! Thanks for sharing your work with me, and thanks for being my friend:)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome, Will:)

[Matching Socks]

Fun! :)
This is so great Will!
It's a great feeling to be in love.
The world looks more colourful.

[willweb]

It certainly does Ana. It is amazing just how brilliant and vibrant it can look when you are in love. Thank you so very much. You have brought a smile to my face today.