If You Ask Me

 

I can’t believe you just danced on a mountain

Fashioned a sail from a butterfly’s wing

Sipped on a cup filled with smiles from the fountain

Stood in the garden before it was spring

 

Climbed up a staircase that led to tomorrow

Painted the sun in a deep shade of blue

Gave back the blessings you thought you could borrow

Sent to the old every wish of the new

 

Carved out a poem in tree bark illusion

Swung from a bridge as the river ran dry

Started the end with a forgone conclusion

Welcomed a friend with a hearty good bye

 

When was the last time you acted this funny

Thinking the stars would all fall from above

Even in rain all your eyes see is sunny

If you ask me I would say you’re in love

Author's Note

Just for fun....

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Heart is dancing reafing this one :) Lovely and adorable emotions.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Ana B. I appreciate your kindness.

[~]

:) yay!!! My type of adventure. Thank you for sharing. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Well, even if it is just for fun, it's a very good poem. Very good rhyming and fluently reading. Liked it very much, Will.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Rudi.

[Baby Ricochet]

Love conquers all! Mostly it just makes you stupid. But in a good way

[willweb]

It definitely does that...I know. Thanks so much my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. Love can make us do great things. I like the places and thoughts in the poem. Good places and vision create by the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Coyote. I am happy you liked this.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Lizardo]

This is a masterpiece, another great poem from you!
I do enjoy a lot your writing, and it was fun reading this poem too
Great work!

[willweb]

Happy you had fun here Lizardo, thank you so much.

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Kelly Scheppers]

This isn't just a poem, it's an adventure...and what a thrill it is to read!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Kelly. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Fun flow and fanciful images - an enjoyable read!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Rita

[Gee]

You're welcome,that's my type of poetry.

[R Smith]

and good fun it is Will, love the rhyming and flow, its down stream all the way for a riverboat ride of Will's special magic and are you in love ? Own up Will :)

[willweb]

I'm sorry my friend. I don't kiss and tell...damn, I couldn't anyway, I still haven't got that kiss. :) Thanks so much Richard.