Even in darkness

Even in darkness

A Poem by willweb

 

Even in darkness,

when a moonless sky

preaches fear from a pulpit of shadows

pointing elongated fingers…

 

When walls crumble

into a rubble strewn alleyway

and graffiti issues spray paint threats

on frantic facades dripping sabotage…

 

And kindness remains 

hidden away in sealed envelopes,

unaddressed and undelivered,

discarded in bundles of false accusations

 

Her beauty shines unending

in effervescent streams,

illuminating in a photograph, poetry

and a kind word from quivering lips

 

Caressing my heart

in watercolor enchantments

and pastel pleasures…

showing me it is not what, but who

 

For this darkness is hers,

weighted thoughts on soft shoulders

binding wrists in tethered worries

and still she smiles…for me

 

 

© 2015 willweb


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You paint a beautiful picture with your words, structure and breaks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good work my dear friend, I enjoyed reading.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing work my friend. This is one of my favorite poems so far.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Rude. This was written for a friend who was experiencing a dark time.
My goodness, Will! You've made me a big fan! Absolutely beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. This was written for someone very special to me. I truly appreciate your nice w.. read more
This was a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

I appreciate that Danny. Thank you.
Will, this is wonderful. My favorite lines:
"preaches fear from a pulpit of shadows"

and
"on frantic facades dripping sabotage…"

and
"in watercolor enchantments"

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Momz, I am happy you liked this one.
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. I loved this one!
fantastic Will, you had me thinking you'd gone over to the dark side but right there at the end Mr. Romance lit up the page again, she smiles for you, i reckon that's cos she's read your work, great as always :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thanks so very much my good friend. You knew I'd have to light it up in the end somehow. :)
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willweb, Her light shine through the darkness, proving my theory that there exists a beacon of light for everyong wandering in the dark. Very thought provoking and well written, willweb. I most certainly will visit again and again. Thanks for sharing this with us all. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Dan for your kindness. I agree with you, everyone has a light and when that l.. read more
Adorable ! even when I've finished reading it , I can't help but stare. The words u chose were splendid and completely meaningful . Loved it !
" And kindness remains
hidden away in sealed envelopes,
unaddressed and undelivered,..." I liked this stanza a lot .I agree with it

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much ReD. A very good friend is going through a rough time right now but she alway.. read more
Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

She is really lucky to have a friend like u : ) . I liked ur poem a lot !
Such a beautiful poem Will.
Maybe she smiles because you give her reasons to smile. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Maybe...I just love it when she smiles. Thanks so much Ana for always leaving such kind words for m.. read more

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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