Even if

Even if moonlight is broken

and wild flowers bloom

beneath a stolen sun

lost in a twilight song,

sung in off key silhouettes

along a choral reef

drenched in caramel pages

of forgotten ink...

 

amidst an ocean’s marathon,

waving to popsicle patrons,

melting your heart

in every sweetness now

clinging to shirt tails

of written directions

leading away…

 

I plead,

stay with me,

and we will find our place

among the hidden forests

and daffodil daydreams…

 

inviting eternity

to become

one with ourselves

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and good words my friend.
"inviting eternity
to become
one with ourselves"
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[s y e]

Will, I loved this one. You get the readers involved, feeling what you feel or what you want them to feel; your readers are so connected and it's all due to the way you write. Spectacular!

[The Black Warrior]

You are soo good WIll hahaha you had me going "aww" the whole time.. this is well penned, so romantic, passionate and sweet...I think I'm going to cry LOL hahahaha

Just beautiful! I love your work hahaha "I don't why!" nah I know why. lol

anyways, thank you for sharing such a wonderful work :D

[willweb]

Thank you so very much again Suk, you are making me blush. I truly do appreciate your kindness.

[The Black Warrior]

Aww, sorry or I am glad hahaha You are very welcome my friend! :D

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh! Overwhelmingly romantic words! The alliteration add to the flow of your words and the imagery is stunning. What a wonderful write this is, Will. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Lydi. Anytime I can get a sigh from you I am happy.

[anne]

Beautiful write my friend.....so well penned.....:))

[willweb]

Thank you Anne for your visit and nice comments

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

lost in the greatness of this....it doesn't get much better than this.....

[willweb]

Wow Rico, that is quite the compliment. Thanks so very much

[Ana B.]

A beautiful painting of beautiful dreams :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ana for your kindness.

[Madalyn Beck]

So wonderful, Will. The imagery and emotions collide magnificently in this piece. xo :)

[willweb]

Thank you Madalyn. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

It is a beautiful flow of bright and fulfilling thoughts with a poet's touch revealing a nice soul.
Vivid images and lovely scenes flash in my mind as I read it.

[willweb]

Happy this one made you smile Josie. Thank you for your kind words.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! :)

[R Smith]

you have the most poetical soul Will, this is both sad and melancholy as it is bright and fulfilling of love, your style is magical well done :)

[willweb]

Thank you Richard. I always appreciate your visits.