A Letter to Santa

Dear Santa,

 

It’s been quite a while

How have you been,

I hope all is well

It’s that time again

 

I know you are busy

It’s almost that day

I don’t want to bother

but please let me say

 

I have been good,

I’ve done my best

So if you would please

grant one request

 

I’m not sure you’ve seen

or had time to read

the poems I’ve posted

to see my one need

 

But now just in case

those poems you missed

where I was just hoping

to be the one kissed

 

It still hasn’t happened

and I don’t know why

but you’re my last hope,

So Please Santa, try

 

Find in your bag

when you’re up in the air

That one verse I need

so her kiss I may share

 

So come Christmas morning

when I do awake

My smile will be there,

my heart it won’t break

 

 

I just want one present

a gift that does rhyme

Just leave me a verse

that makes her kiss mine

 

I’ll leave you some cookies

a glass of milk too

If you would just make

this dream of mine true

 

Let me now say Thank you

if somehow you send

That one special verse

from your magic pen

 

So that I may write

a poem to bring

Her kiss to my lips

and make my heart sing

 

Please say hi to Rudolph,

the elves in your crew

and please give my best

to Mrs. Claus too

 

And stay warm this Christmas,

no need for a chill

forever your friend

 

A poet named,

 

Will

 

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

This is probably the cutest thing I have read all year. I know I'm about nine months late (or three months early depending on how you look at it) but kudos on this, I looked it. I hope you get/got your wish.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful and sweet, i'm very certain Santa will grant your wish, how could he not? I love your work.

[willweb]

I'm still waiting. :) Thanks so much Ana B.

[Rene Salinas]

Amen! to this and so be it and that is just for starters. Quick to add p.s dear santa Rene's nervous system is not as strong as it used to be and he is seduced with the most enchanting words every so often only to succeed at failing to bring closure to the tension created. If there was any possibility to bring them lips closer as to bring not only conclusion but also resolution as it seems like a note left resounding without the receptacle that would capture its distribuition.

Yours faithfully.

Thank You.

[willweb]

Would you mind if I forwarded that to Santa? It might just do the trick. Thanks so much Rene, my friend for offering your assistance in helping me reach my quest.

[W R Stowe]

Very well presented and from what I read you already have the verse upon your pen Santa don't need to bring a thing "The sky is vast bright and blue,Darling I'm so inlove with you"How does this work?

[willweb]

I'll give it a try and see. Thanks so very much.

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

[Rita L. Sev]

:) This one brings a smile, Will - May Santa grant your wish!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Rita. I hope so too, I'm getting tired of kissing coal.

[Einstein Noodle]

what can i say!! i love it .. love the child like simplicity of the request to Santa ... very endearing .. i join everyone in hopes your dream is given .. such a sucky road .. the road to true love .. so glad i am old and over it ;) great poem .. loved it!
E.

[willweb]

Oh no you don't...you're never too old for love. Well...I'm not. :) Thanks my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh yes i do young man! i am in over and in .. ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Make a hat out of mistletoe, That'll get you all kinds of action, mostly from drunk people you don't want near you but you gotta be vigilant.

[willweb]

Now why didn't I think of that? Thank you Baby Ricochet.

[Lyn Anderson]

Very sweet. I hope you get your Christmas kiss wish.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KL...I do too.

[Gee]

Never mind a poem Will,fill yourself full of JD and let the Dutch courage do the talking.Good read

[willweb]

Not a bad idea, thanks so much.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very good wishing letter. I hope you get what you wish, Will. Merry Christmas. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thanks again Rudi for your visit and nice words.