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Reviews

[Gee]

Invisible ink makes reviewing,
a terrible job to be doing,
so when posting an ode,
take a trip down the road,
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(I used your ink on last line)

[willweb]

No problem. Happy you liked this one. I worked hard on it.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great poem!!!!! The writing make all the sense of the the title! The meaning behind it is deep. Love it;)

[willweb]

It was a hard one to write, but I am thrilled you liked it. Thanks so much for stopping by. :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Your welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

definitely empty.........

[willweb]

Thanks for the visit Jacob

[therisa]

Um, Will, have you forgotten to add words to this, or is this, an experiment piece, meant to test our understanding of, what emptiness is? Must admit, if the latter, you're doing a great job, in the sharing of this concept. Sadly, I know, all too well, what it means to empty.

[willweb]

I guess it is however you want to view it my friend. Thanks for the visit. It gets lonely in the poetry world.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Will. Maybe next year, you're loneliness will end.