Unravels

 

 

The sun sets

on this long day

as clouds flow in

cherry lemonade whispers

somewhere off in the distance

 

and

 

I know it will not be long until

I am in your arms once more

feeling your love

as it unravels

upon me

Author's Note

Hey, I wanted to join the party too. :)

Kalypso and Ana both wrote poems with a variation of the word "unravel" in the title. I just thought I'd hop on board as well.

Here are the links to their poems if you'd like to read.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/kalypso/1457060/

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1457896/

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Awww.... Now we can all have our unraveling poems connected by their threads sooo cute. I love this Will... It was a complete accident with Ana and I ... Kinda like wearing the same outfit to school with out planning it, lol... Now we have a triplet. Fun write and thanks for joining us.

[willweb]

I guess we should make sure the knots are tight...Thanks so much Kalypso. Like I said below to Ana...well you can read it. :)

[Matching Socks]

I had a little chuckle when I saw Kalypso's.
Love yours! We should make it the word of the day.

[willweb]

That would be a fun word of the day. Sorry to hitch hike on your's and Kalypso's poems...I was inspired. Thanks so much Ana.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sounds like a party that is the morning after the night before Will, where regret and hangovers leave us determined never to partake again.

[willweb]

Huh? Thanks I guess.