Unravels

Unravels

A Poem by willweb

 

 

The sun sets

on this long day

as clouds flow in

cherry lemonade whispers

somewhere off in the distance

 

and

 

I know it will not be long until

I am in your arms once more

feeling your love

as it unravels

upon me

© 2014 willweb


Author's Note

willweb
Hey, I wanted to join the party too. :)

Kalypso and Ana both wrote poems with a variation of the word "unravel" in the title. I just thought I'd hop on board as well.

Here are the links to their poems if you'd like to read.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/kalypso/1457060/

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1457896/

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''cherry lemonade whispers'' smashing thought. Beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
This was a really sweet poem. Well done :) I honestly thought it was going to be depressing by the title but I was wrong

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

I am happy you were surprised. Thanks so much.
beautiful poem Will, it unravels so very well, bravo :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

I like that Richard...thanks so much my friend.
"Cherry lemonade whispers" WOW....innocence and decadence all rolled up into one, Will! A poem filled with passion and longing....so romantic. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi for your wonderful comments. I am thrilled you stopped by.
Beautifum Will, it's simple and cute, just another good poem. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi. Did you read Ana and Kalypso's poem too?
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

Now I have done, Will, very fine job of all three of you. :) Rudi
It is great. I truly enjoyed it will. Going to read there poems now. You make it seem so easy. Great looking font and display, wording just simply devine. I want some cherry lemonade too...Thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Dale. I hope you like their poems too, they were my inspiration.
Confuser

9 Years Ago

You're welcome Will, well done. Thanks so much for your encouragement.
A true poet, well done Will! i have to say the cherry lemonade part is my favorite! Though I don't think I've had the chance to try some. :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sunny. Hopefully someday you can try some.
"I am in your arms once more
feeling your love
as it unravels
upon me"

You are unraveling indeed as a great poet and a romantic writer. Bravo, sir...:).......................


Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sami. Not sure I can compare to you...but I'm trying.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Hahaha. Thank you kindly for all...:).....
A longing
To fall deep
Into your embrace
Without guilt.

Stripping the soul
Of all worldly cares
For a brief moment.

To breeze in
Your heavenly scent
Among the roses
And magnolias.

Knowing
This moment
Is fleeting
At best
Between us.


Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend.
therisa

9 Years Ago

Your Welcome, Will.
i like this a lot, nice word choice :) x

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend. Be sure to read Kalypso's and Ana's as well.

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