Eternal Fires

 

 

Unfolded secrets

caress my heart

in full view of the stars

Silent dreams and whispers

breathe…

in constellations of hope

 

Ribbons cast along the shore

in effervescent hues,

dance as

contoured waves approach

adrift, trickling…

forever a’ glow of this view

 

Touch me deeper still,

my soul

loudly echoes your name

in trumpet’s blare

of desperate tones

hoping you

hear

 

For in this heart does rage

an inferno, scorching flames of you,

climbing in a fevered pitch

Reaching for

endless journeys, as

eternal fires burn

your love

forever into my soul

 

 

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Stunning words: "Silent dreams and whispers; breathe…; in constellations of hope." This piece is almost a song.

NOTES: I recommend you increase the font size. I had to go to max magnification to be able to read it.

[willweb]

Thanks so much. I will see what I can do.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Sami Khalil]

When your ears echo her name and your heart miss the beats, you know it is that eternal flame of love. Bravo, sir...:).............

[willweb]

It is a wonderful feeling. Thank you so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong title led to amazing poetry. I like the soft tone of want leading to a very good ending.
"Reaching for
endless journeys, as
eternal fires burn
your love
forever into my soul"
Amazing lines above. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so much Coyote. I am happy you liked this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

This poem really warms the heart Will. Beautiful.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ana. I hope it keeps you warm all winter.