How love feels

 

I have always been a glass half full kind of guy

and maybe even a little bit more than half full

Regardless, as long as there was something

sitting in a glass even close

to that imaginary line,

I knew how to make it enough

 

So tell me why now as I look

I see the glass as completely empty…

 

when you’re not around

Reviews

[Moonie]

Aww, that's so sad towards the end. You know how to strike on all the right strings to make the heart sing. Although, I would give a teeny - tiny suggestion--- how about writing "kinda" instead of "kind of " in the 2nd line? It would give a casual look to the sentence, help with the flow, and in my opinion it would bring out the theme even more effectively. However, it is your poem, and the decision is yours entirely. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much MFD, I will consider your suggestion, but the poem didn't garner a lot interest, so it may not matter too much anyway. But I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Matching Socks]

That's such a sad feeling my friend.
This time of year certainly makes us feel that emptiness.
Hugs

[willweb]

Thank you Ana. I truly do appreciate you always being so kind to me. It is your comments I always look forward to.