I wish for cloudy days

 

 

Sunny days bring warmth

but also cast shadows…

 

reminding me,

when I look behind

that there is only one

and it is mine

 

That is why

I wish for cloudy days…

 

so I can pretend

there are two

and one of them

is you

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

a lovely lonely write friend Will. I have many cloudy days now here in the Big Blue....

[Zakari Schmidt]

I need to leave the Midwest haha, such deep concepts captured in your words..impressive my friend!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Zachary. No need to move...you do just fine with your writing where you are, I know, I have read some. :)

[therisa]

How can I be critical, when my heart is sighing; left, right, and centre, with each stanza written.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for always being so nice to me. You make me smile.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Will.

[The Black Warrior]

OMG Will, you are the most romantic poet that I have ever met. I am serious! :D LOL

I love everything about...a little speechless actually

Thank you for sharing ;)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Suk. That is a huge compliment. I am thrilled you liked this.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome! ;)))

[Einstein Noodle]

i think the metaphor in the first two verses is stunning ... i was surprised at the turn that makes my overall impression one of melancholy (not a negative thing mind you) ..your poem leaves me hoping for a better day for the narrator ... one in which sunshine is warm and comforting .. to be shared .. and i love short, precise powerful statements .. like this is.. :)
E.

[willweb]

Thanks so much E. I appreciate your kind comments on my poem.

[Confuser]

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Think it's more than clever, it is great writing. Thank you so much!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Dale. I am happy you liked this one.

[Confuser]

Y/W....................................................................wrote a short story, please take a look. Hit me between the eyes with your truth.

[R Smith]

haha, don't think i should laugh cos its kinda sad, just that the end made me smile, i love the way you write Will your work is always entertaining :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Richard for these nice words.

[Lyn Anderson]

THIS is probably one of my absolute favourites of yours. No critique.:)

[willweb]

Wow, that is a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much KLGoode.

[Ma'at]

this has a lot of mixed emotions, at least from POV. i really liked it x

[willweb]

Thank you so much.

[Matching Socks]

Hadn't thought of it that way, I wish for cloudy days too.
Good poem Will. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ana. I am happy you liked this one.