I wish for cloudy days

I wish for cloudy days

A Poem by willweb

 

 

Sunny days bring warmth

but also cast shadows…

 

reminding me,

when I look behind

that there is only one

and it is mine

 

That is why

I wish for cloudy days…

 

so I can pretend

there are two

and one of them

is you

© 2014 willweb


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a lovely lonely write friend Will. I have many cloudy days now here in the Big Blue....

Posted 8 Years Ago


I need to leave the Midwest haha, such deep concepts captured in your words..impressive my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Zachary. No need to move...you do just fine with your writing where you are, I know, .. read more
How can I be critical, when my heart is sighing; left, right, and centre, with each stanza written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for always being so nice to me. You make me smile.
therisa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome, Will.
OMG Will, you are the most romantic poet that I have ever met. I am serious! :D LOL

I love everything about...a little speechless actually

Thank you for sharing ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Suk. That is a huge compliment. I am thrilled you liked this.
The Black Warrior

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome! ;)))
i think the metaphor in the first two verses is stunning ... i was surprised at the turn that makes my overall impression one of melancholy (not a negative thing mind you) ..your poem leaves me hoping for a better day for the narrator ... one in which sunshine is warm and comforting .. to be shared .. and i love short, precise powerful statements .. like this is.. :)
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much E. I appreciate your kind comments on my poem.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Think it's more than clever, it is great writing. Thank you so much!

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dale. I am happy you liked this one.
Confuser

10 Years Ago

Y/W....................................................................wrote a short story, please t.. read more
haha, don't think i should laugh cos its kinda sad, just that the end made me smile, i love the way you write Will your work is always entertaining :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Richard for these nice words.
THIS is probably one of my absolute favourites of yours. No critique.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

willweb

10 Years Ago

Wow, that is a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much KLGoode.
this has a lot of mixed emotions, at least from POV. i really liked it x

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Hadn't thought of it that way, I wish for cloudy days too.
Good poem Will. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ana. I am happy you liked this one.

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