If only

If only I had told you of

the thoughts that filled my mind,

the plans we would have made,

the maps we would have drawn,

the places we would have visited,

the paths we would have walked,

the sunsets we would have seen,

the fun we would have experienced,

the times we would have celebrated,

the songs we would have danced to,

the poetry we would have written,

the life we would have lived,

the affection we would have shared

 

If only -

 

I had said more than just,

I love you

Reviews

[s y e]

I agree with Ana, maybe it's not too late... In fact, sometimes, it's never too late. Try, all you can do is try. I loved this one because I can relate.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Noodlebumble for this wonderful review.

[Matching Socks]

Maybe it's not too late to make it all up to her Will. Tell her all these things.
This is beautiful and heart breaking.

[willweb]

I will try and hope she understands. Thank you so much Ana for always making me smile.

[Matching Socks]

Just show her your poetry. She fall in love over and over. :)

[willweb]

You think so? Why haven't I thought of that? :)

[Matching Socks]

Dumdum....

[willweb]

Big smile here

[Eleanor]

Sometimes just I Love you's are not enough. A relationship requires trust...caring...and love!
If someone makes you feel special, that's love. If someone is always there to tell you that you are beautiful, that's love. If someone never breaks your trust, thats love.
Love is mistaken just as 3 words. Its much more.
Ahaha let's leave this. You did a great job writing this :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much and you are correct in everything you say.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love you's are never quite enough...those words might seem shallow and meaningless without the other words ...maybe we say it too casually anymore...

if only...i remember someone...i should have said more, myself.

[willweb]

I think we all do Jacob. Thanks so very much for your kind words.

[Spammy_J]

My heart just broke a little. Beautiful.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Spammy

[yuki]

Aww this is so sad this is so great though too!

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Yuki

[Coyote Poetry]

Words not spoken haunt us more than the words spoken. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Coyote for your nice words.

[AprilRN1210]

just loving someone is never enough.. it is what you do.. how you make them feel.. anything worthwhile in this life takes dedication and hard work.. on the same token, if they knew you loved them and didn't communicate needs, desires----did they really feel the same for you?.. if you truly love something, you will fight heaven and earth for it.. lovely what would have been's in this piece.. moving and bittersweet.. awesome writing as usual.. your writing always touches me..

[willweb]

Thank you so much April for this beautiful review of my piece. I know I can always count on you to bring a smile to my face with your kind and thoughful words. You are correct, it is supposed to work that way. Your question is one I wish I could answer or maybe I do know the answer but just don't want to convince myself. Thanks again, it is always wonderful when you stop by.

[AprilRN1210]

accepting and letting go are two of the hardest things we have to do... we always try to hold on to that small amount of hope, unfortunately it is powered by denial a lot of the time.. I am glad I can bring a smile to your day, my friend.. it is always a pleasure.. you are more than welcome:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Usually it's the other way around. Just sayin' ... Good job.

[willweb]

Sometimes it is and sometimes it ain't. Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you stopped by.