Amazing insight and a great degree of understanding the past and what is left behind to deal with a daily basis.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thak you Josie so very much. I am thrilled you liked this one today. Your nice words alway make me s.. read moreThak you Josie so very much. I am thrilled you liked this one today. Your nice words alway make me smile.
A amazing poem. I could feel the want, regret and honest thoughts. A perfect ending to the poem. I like the poetry that ends with a question. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much for your nice review today. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
I love the narrative progression of this piece will...it has the feel of a spoken-word piece and I think it would work splendidly well as one, but it remains undeniably poetic in the vividness of its imagery...I love the 'tripping' and 'falling' lines...boy do I relate to those sentiments...it drives me crazy that I devote so much of my mental energy to bemoaning the things I don't have, yet I go on bemoaning nonetheless...the ending is delivered perfectly, with that pause for dramatic effect...you always speak to me on the deepest level with your work my friend...great work as always.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Kublakhan27 for this fantastic and humbling review of my poem today. I'd like to s.. read moreThank you so much Kublakhan27 for this fantastic and humbling review of my poem today. I'd like to say I am happy you know these feelings, but I wouldn't wish this misery on anyone.
...because love is the one thing we are willing to fight for! ...besides, there's always the possibility of hope. Much enjoyed this one, Will.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yes there is Kelly, sometimes hope is all we have. Thank you so very much for reviewing my poem. I a.. read moreYes there is Kelly, sometimes hope is all we have. Thank you so very much for reviewing my poem. I am so very happy you liked it.
Hmm. I read and reviewed this, and apparently my review disappeared. Anyway, it is once again a beautiful write. I understand the wanting, the waiting, the needing, the not knowing. It is a cage.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much KLGoode for this wonderful review of my poem. If you find that key, please le.. read moreThank you so very much KLGoode for this wonderful review of my poem. If you find that key, please let me know.
Hey Willweb, I can kinda relate to this...as if there's always a grey cloud nearby...but its kinda like you want it there. How is it that one learns from mistakes...but keeps up the same pattern. Interesting.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Frontier for this nice review. I wish I knew the answer to that question.
Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things.
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