Monochrome opposite

Monochrome opposite

A Poem by willweb

What seems black and white,
common as -
piano keys beneath nimble fingers,
candle shadows dancing on an
opaque drawn blind,
blurred highway lines dotted
on fresh asphalt -

is really the reflection of my racing pulse
upon pearl painted skies
every time you walk by -
in living color

© 2014 willweb


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So colorful my friend, monochrome is just simply not you. You are a spectrum of colors, and through those colors you can paint, poetry, and play music... always on high level. I thank you greatly for this poem.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Elisa for this nice reveiw of my poem. I am thrilled you liked this.

10 Years Ago

Always my pleasure Will :) you know I love your poetry!
This is beautiful. I really enjoyed this. Life is not complete in just black and white. That one person who brings color to your life is a person to keep. Beautiful! xo :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

As long as that color is not red. :) Thank you so much Madalyn for being so nice to me.
Madalyn Beck

10 Years Ago

No more red. Done. :)
The writing is indeed a powerful one and for one thing, it flows so nicely and doesn't go all crumpled. However, I feel like there's something missing, like some detail or more colour. I don't know, but there's just something that needs adding.
Hope this helps!

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jonas, kind of a hazed line between color and drab is what I was going for, but I wi.. read more
Jonas

10 Years Ago

Always in your service.

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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