Sweet Dawn Kisses

Woven patterns of

tapestry blushings,

threaded pairings of

non-metallic shimmering

wait beyond -

 

soft feathered breaths, hazed visions,

flowing on a pale horizon,

weeping within a forecast of darkness -

dreaming only of the light

draping gun metal skies

in effervescent brocade blooms

 

Moon glow sonatas

echo between pearl drop

starscapes whispering

a fond farewell -   

 

and a songbird choir

harmonizes with glistening dew drops,

reflecting sweet dawn kisses

on plum petal cheeks

as morning returns

once again -

 

finding you

in my arms

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh lord, how romantic are you as of late, Will? I am loving this side of you. What a gorgeous morning it would be to wake in your lovers arms.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Noodlehead. I guess I took the wrong pills this morning. :) I am happy you liked this one.

[Einstein Noodle]

waking in reliable arms of love .. the result of commitment .. packed with colorful, imaginative metaphors .. enough for 20 poems (well maybe not quite 20; but lots) ... :) very well done .. from falling to sleep to waking .. such visions you give us .. nice one!
E.

[willweb]

Thank you E. for your nice words to me. Sometimes I do wake - sometimes just a little too late.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh wilweb .. thats painful .. be well! and write on for sure ..
E.

[Rita L. Sev]

and a songbird choir
harmonizes with glistening dew drops,
reflecting sweet dawn kisses
on plum petal cheeks...

Really beautiful phrasing, Will. Very nice!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Rita for taking the time to read and review my poetry. You are one of the few who do so.

[Cory Barrett]

What a wonderful morning it would be!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Cory.

[Lydia Shutter]

A swaying sonata of romance and sweet images. Will, you have enchanted me on this Friday morning with this gem. Lydi**

[willweb]

Then my work here is done. :) Thank you again Lydi, your nice comments are my smile today.

[Cassie]

awww!!! this is mind blowing, heart blowing if there is anything like that...loved loved it

[willweb]

If there wasn't there is now!!! :) Thank you Cassie for this wonderful review.

[Kayleigh]

Romantic, Will - this is out of this world good. You definitely got me wanting to bring out my romantic side...

[willweb]

Kayleigh, reading your poetry tells me you don't need any help in that department. :) Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

[Lyn Anderson]

Plum petal cheeks is a great line. A really soft, romantic piece again, well done.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KLGoode. Just letting my softer side out for a little while.

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a romantic write. Very sweet and tender with your word caresses. I have to say, you did a great job with the imagery as well. The vibe of this is so soothing and sweet. Great write!! xo :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Madalyn. I really enjoy your work so this review is a huge compliment to me

[just Penny]

A sweet romantic write that I might actually call "poetic", particularly like the lines
?Moon glow sonatas
echo between pearl drop
starscapes whispering
a fond farewell"
Nice. Penny

[willweb]

Thanks so much Penny. I am thrilled by your wonderful comments. Glad you liked this one