Endless Tide

Lace curtains dance

on ocean breezes,

cool upon our skin,

flickering flames

Candle lit

shadows on the wall,

two bodies,

one silhouette,

surrendering

to the rhythm

of endless waves

white with foam

Steady, smooth

melodic movements

as the tide

comes

in again

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Ooh... nicely penned romance and sensuality, Will.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Rita. I am happy you liked this one

[s y e]

Woot woot, Will this was hot. Sugar and spice and all things nice, LOL -- lovely little poem you have written here... Me likey, likey!

[willweb]

I am happy you likey, likey this one Noodlehead. Thank you for your nice review.

[Kayleigh]

Well I'll say, what a spicy little ditty from you Will. I am so glad to see a little bit of spice coming from you pen. Love the way you have worded it, I completely agree -- subtle. ;))

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Kayleigh for this wonderful review. I must have grabbed a different pen that day. Happy you liked it.

[Lyn Anderson]

Oooh this is so smooth it slinks past the MATURE police with a hair and and a whisker. Love the subtlety of it. I could use some subtle, I generally like to use a big club.:)

[willweb]

Thanks so much KLGoode. Happy you enjoyed my slinking today. :)

[willweb]

Love is like the tide, love is music, so are your words Will...

I like how smooth this one reads, and how intense your wordplay always is.

- Elisa

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your nice comments today Elisa. I am very happy you enjoyed this one.

I'm happy I've read, :) my friend.... those little poems of you are stunning.

[Alfred Kukitz]

The illusion of the ocean cascading into and out of a window is a smooth beauty. Like it a lot!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Alfred for your nice comments today. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I always look for you willweb. You tickle the poet in me.

[Matching Socks]

This has a very nice feel to it.
One silhouette can only mean one thing.
I really like that thing going on here in your poem.
It means you're riding the wave, screw the before, not worry about tomorrow.
I'm here. Now.

(Well, that's how I read it at least)

[willweb]

Just trying to keep my head above water. Funny, the sun is licking my nose as I doggie paddle.
read moreJust trying to keep my head above water. Funny, the sun is licking my nose as I doggie paddle.
Thank you so much Ance for your nice reviews of my work.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. That is such a cute visual... :-)