Another Cold Case

I didn't know,

but I do now

 

You are a criminal,

on the run - wanted?

 

Your latest victim,

my heart

 

Your crime -

Entering and Breaking

 

But you don't have to worry,

my heart refuses to press charges 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Simple, but powerful, and the subtle twist on break and enter is very effective.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KLGoode. That is what I started with, E & B and tried to build something around it. I am happy you liked this because I wasn't too sure about it. I just stared at it so long I said the hell with it and posted it to see what others would think. Thank you for your nice comments.

[Matching Socks]

your heart is the victim...
like it willweb, friend.
screw the charges, just get the heck away.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ance. I do run, but it seems I run in circles.

[Matching Socks]

you need to switch to a new track and...
... chugga chugga chooooo choooo choooooose someone new.

[willweb]

So what you are saying is I need to redirect my train of thought?

[Matching Socks]

oh you are sharp!

yes! go blow off some steam babe!

[willweb]

Trying but it seems my caboose is dragging.

[Matching Socks]

you need to feed that fire and get that engine moving Casey Jones.

[willweb]

Driving that train, high on cocaine, Casey Jones you better, watch your speed. Sorry, that made me feel like singing. :)

[Matching Socks]

you have a lovely voice...
but at least you know now that there's trouble ahead and trouble behind so you better just watch your speed and PROCEED WITH CAUTION

[willweb]

Hey, was that a duet? Like Tom Petty and Stevie Nicks? Stop draggin my caboose around.

[Matching Socks]

Lol! No, I don't think that one's been done. Is your singing any good?

[willweb]

I've been asked to sing solo many times. Solo no one can hear me. I know, old joke.

[Matching Socks]

So you suck? Who cares... It can be Death Metal. This is Another Cold Case after all...

[willweb]

I was thinking more like William Shatner doing Godsmack - bad.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. He's so cool he probably could...