Low tide

The tide slips out

and the sand becomes part of time

Sifting moments into memories

scattered along a shore

of neglected feelings,

disappearing on the dampened outline

of life

 

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

And then you walk your own shores, gathering driftwords worn by waves of emotion while the moon pulls you into the horizon forgetting to tell you what is necessary to dry your heart. Sucks when the high tide comes in and washes away your castle.

[willweb]

That damn high tide. : ) Thanks again my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Great metaphor and imagery. Will. A powerful piece.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Rita.

[s y e]

Ah Will this is truly fantastic, I loved the metaphors in this one. I just love reading you.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Noodlehead for this nice review. I am happy you liked this.

[kublakhan27]

Having grown up on a shoreline, this one definitely speaks to me...I relate to it and enjoyed it very much...well done willweb.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Kublkhan27 for your nice comments today.

[willweb]

Perfection, a human being wrapped in timeless time, it becomes a hard fossil of loneliness when it takes so many years... or a pearl, that shines, when this is a choice... beautiful beautiful poetry.

- Elisa

[willweb]

Elisa, thank you so very much for reading and leaving such a beautiful review. I am excited you enjoyed this.

You are very welcome, anytime. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

A wonderful metaphor, and beautiful imagery.

[willweb]

KLGoode, thank you so very much for all of your visits an your nice comments. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awesome pen Will you have portrayed so much with your few words :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Vidya. Your comments are very special to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Will :)

[Matching Socks]

This is why I am such a fan if the short and sweet.
It's high impact. You pack a big punch with just a few words.
Great poem Will. Really love it.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Ance for this wonderful review.