Somewhere between heaven and twilight (A collaboration with Kalypso)

High within the illuminated sky,

a silver midnight sun....

it seemed like a darker day

found a brighter night,

somewhere between heaven and twilight

 

Majestic oaks in silhouette

and shadows paint the earth,

alive within lemonade shimmers

a' glow of promised beauty,

as the stars sleep...dreaming

 

Author's Note

Thank you Kalypso for allowing me to post this poem.

Reviews

[ANM]

Very vivid with imagery that sucks the reader in!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[ANM]

Your welcome!

[Ma'at]

thanks to K for the read request. i loved the word choice and imagery in the stanzas, it was amazingly written without too much of this or too little of that. good job :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ghost Stories for your nice comments. Kalypso was the inspiration behind this. I am glad you liked it.

[Einstein Noodle]

have no idea how you guys divided this .. but for me the first verse is absolutely spectacular .. and the closing lines drift me off to clouds of hope .. very nice experience to read!
E.

[willweb]

The first stanza is Kalypso's and it is wonderful. It was her words that inspired this. Thank you so much for your comments.

[Chris Micha]

Beautiful you two. I love the play between light & dark, my fav! :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[David Scott]

I had to smile while I read this poetry... You have described a feeling well as many have visualized in the twilight hours. A relatable write and a gently calming read.

[willweb]

Thank you so much David. I am happy this made you smile.

[Frieda P]

Muchly enjoyed, love 'lemonade shimmers'....great collaboration!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Frieda for your comments on our poem. This was inspired by Kalypso's love of the moon.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

:D Frieda...It has been so long, wonderful to see your presence back here, i believe I speak for everyone in saying we missed you! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading... I know though, "lemonade shimmers" is an amazing image. Will's writing is awesome.

[s y e]

You guys, this was fantabulous! You guys really wrote such a stunning piece with lots of emotion. I love how your pens merged and wrote as one. Lovely job both of you!

[willweb]

Thank you Noodlehead. Kalypso inspired this poem. I am glad you liked it.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

NOODLE DOODLE! Thanks beautiful for stopping by and reading... Will is just being shy again, he is the true creative genius behind this poem...so grateful to see your words here, lovely. xoxo

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is quite a beautiful description that sounds as if one poet wrote it, so your collaboration is incredibly smooth you two.
nicely done...as those stars will sleep.

jacob

[willweb]

Thank you Jacob for your comments today. Kalypso is a fantastic poet to write with.

[Alani]

How pretty! A silver midnight sun! :)
I just love the rhyming in this!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thank you so much Alani, so kind of you to stop by and read, we appreciate your lovely review. :)

[willweb]

Thank you Alani for commenting on our poem. It was fun writing with Kalypso. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Lauren]

This is so lovely. You two write wonderfully together :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thank you Lovelace, very sweet of you to read and leave your thoughts here. Will is a fantastic poet, and so fun to write with. Many thank yous!!

[willweb]

Thank you so much for your nice comments today. This was a first for me and Kalypso, but she is a wonderful poet, she made it easy.