Broken thoughts

Broken thoughts

A Poem by willweb

It was of the finest of threads

Woven through silver lined clouds

A tiny strand of perfect affection

Connecting each star to another

Spun of memories past and future

Stitched together by love

An endless union between two hearts

Tied tightly by delicate desires

Double knotted in cherished moments

Which I thought would never break…

© 2014 willweb


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Wonderful. Quite beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tawnya. I am happy you liked this one.
I really loved this one Will, I really think you've outdone yourself with this one and it's going into my favourites!

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your nice omments Noodlehead. And thank you for putting this in your favorites.. read more
Oh My I see this imagery so well.
I think we had the same vision.
somewhere in my collections I wrote one with very similar images.
I titled it " Days of Light" I'm sure you'd love it as I do yours.

You know though... I see Broken Thoughts as thoughts coming from a real place and time.
But I also see that perhaps Nothing is really broken.
Perhaps on some celestial shores that Love still shimmers in the light.
Perhaps on this earthly plane the connection of what is was and will be was only temporarily or appearance of separation because that is required for the two to get thier job done that they were here to do.
Perhaps the short lived togetherness in the here and now was to strengthen the Soul into knowing there is,was and will be that eternal connection after the Job is done.

Nothing that Beautifully created could really possibly fail. There must surely be the place time for it to flourish and be.
Even the plants die off when winter comes, Yet come the spring, they are reborn by roots and even more bountiful by seed.
There is the time and place for everything under the Sun. Hold on to what you have and never let go.
What will be will be again.

Thank you for sharing this Beautiful Story thru poem form :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cryingkate for your wonderful and inspiring comments today. Sometimes these feelin.. read more
Cryingkate

10 Years Ago

Awe Thanks so much... I have an enormous to do list today that can only be done on a working busines.. read more
Simple language with powerful imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much John for reading and commenting today.
seriously sad ending to such a hopeful piece...nicely stitched together by your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Jacob.
This is amazing in its unique celestial, poignant imagery...
Very well crafted and pleasing rhyme...beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you Barrie Joy for your comments on my poem. I am happy this one touched you.
Things break ...
It seems almost everything does in this life.
Now, even our thoughts seem to break...
Yet, it is lovely before it gets broken as you show so well.


Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much David for you nice comments on my poem. It does seem like they break more now than.. read more
This is definitely going in with my favourites.
I always enjoy visiting your poems.

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

That almost rhymes.
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Well Duh. I'm a fricking poet.
I'm not just here for comedy relief...
:]
willweb

10 Years Ago

That's funny...wait, no its not. :)
Awww this is so pretty and sweet.Into my favorites for sure Will :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


willweb

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very, very much Vidya for reading my poetry. It is so nice that you take the time to do.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are so welcome here its like you've always been here:)

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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