This is Poetry?

Split them up please William - I read the first and wanted to comment but don't want to - hey wait no I could do it that way. Would you prefer not to post them individually because I was impressed from the off and would like to comment on them individually.
the first one - Poetry - I found fascinating - that interplay was cool and had wit and candour.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Poetry.  Love it
Happy Hour.  Love it
Antipathy for Wednesday Night Corp.  Ok
Pop Clichés I Can Do Without. Ok
Dirtbag.  Don't care
A Poor Attempt at Profundity.  Ok
Jump. Like it
Who Snapchats Anyway? Like it
The View From Down South. Ok
Beans and Broccoli. Love it
Mental Breakdown Instigated by Bad Plums. Like it
Temptation. Like it
Humbug. Love it
Meditations Starting in Falafel King. Love it
A Found Poem of Wants. Don't understand
Found Poem Generated by Microsoft Data Collection from My Own Words. Don't understand
Outro. Like it

Just Don't ask Why

Posted 9 Years Ago

I am currently looking to start submitting poems to magazines and journals... if you enjoyed my poetry could you reply below with the 2-3 poems you enjoyed the most. Many thanks :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Split them up please William - I read the first and wanted to comment but don't want to - hey wait no I could do it that way. Would you prefer not to post them individually because I was impressed from the off and would like to comment on them individually.
the first one - Poetry - I found fascinating - that interplay was cool and had wit and candour.

Posted 9 Years Ago