Remember

Don’t let me forget

            the color of your eyes

I find them so beautiful

 

Don’t let me forget

            how you feel against me

I love it so

 

Don’t let me forget

            the sound of your voice

I hear it harmonizing with me

 

Don’t let me forget

            how sweet your lips taste

I feel it linger on mine

 

Don’t let me forget

            how much I love you

I can’t live without you.

Author's Note

~11/24/2014~

Reviews

[blueyedany72]

I like the repetition of the poem. One thing I would encourage is to remember that with such a short poem, each word holds a lot of weight. Try not to let any word be filler or wasted. Use the most powerful word to express your message. Just a thought.

Overall, I really like this piece. Nicely done.