So Many Curious Questions

So Many Curious Questions

A Poem by Savior of Time
"

I'm confused about this..

"
The broken glass
Appears in front of me
Who am I?
My image blurred
Staring right back at me
Who am I?
I am scarred
My arms and my legs
What am I?
Torn to pieces
Cuts and bruises are stained
What am I?
Age is gone
Not young but not old
When am I?
Weak, fragile bones
Yet capable of mostly anything
When am I?
Secrets are hidden
Mists over my brown eyes
Where am I?
Lost my way
Can't tell right from left
Where am I?
Crying crystal tears
So much pain from nowhere
Why am I?
I'm killing myself
From the inside and out
Why am I?

© 2013 Savior of Time


Author's Note

Savior of Time
I don't know who I am. What I'm here for. When it is. Where I am or where I'm going. Why I'm doing this. I hope you liked.. Please review and RR it to others. Thanks..
-Willa

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We all come to the point where we ask these types of questions to ourselves. Instead of asking who am I, think about who you would like to be. Not like someone else but what would you like to see your self, certain characteristics and stuff like that. I don't think we would find an answer if we ask who am I because we all have moments when we change. I think it's best to focus on how you want to treat others and what kind of things you are interested in. Don't focus on what others are doing or saying, but ask yourself what would I like to be. There really isn't a straight answer for these things but know if you ever reach a point where you don't like yourself you can always take a step back in your mind and turn away from whatever it is that you don't want to be involved in. lol don't know if this helped or not and sorry it's kinda long.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Haha, thanks Peace Keeper. This did help, even if I have heard it more than I should. I don't really.. read more
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

haha you're welcome...it doesn't hurt to remind ourselves sometimes never know when we need to hear .. read more



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You're Willa, you're here because you make us all smile and cry and laugh. it's 2013, you're in your head, and you are going anywhere you want to. :) Beautiful.

-Dell

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

-Willa
Well that was sad. :( Whenever I see a mirror i think DAMN! who's this beautiful lady? I mean it as a joke but you know it's always fun to make yourself you know laugh and smile a bit. I don't know who I am, I know what I would like to be, but my answer varies from time to time with growth. I think we never have the answer we just have a general idea of who we are and why we exist but in the end, sometimes it shouldn't be taken seriously because it's too stressful to think about, life is too short, and sometimes it's just good to sit around and EAT!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie Cook

11 Years Ago

No I'm not it was just a statement of what I do. There was no need to apply to yourself at all.
Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Oh, okay. My friends think I don't eat enough so I was just making sure. Thanks for clearing that up.. read more
Jamie Cook

11 Years Ago

Oh, well that's your business. And welcome.
I agree with Peace that its normal to ask these questions of ourselves, especially in harder stages of life, (I just got through one of my phases). This is a wonderful poem and I can see you're improving since it reflects on your work. Keep powering through chica!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Thanks!

-Willa
I loVe the last stanza and I sometimes
feel this way even now.-100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :D

-Willa
We all come to the point where we ask these types of questions to ourselves. Instead of asking who am I, think about who you would like to be. Not like someone else but what would you like to see your self, certain characteristics and stuff like that. I don't think we would find an answer if we ask who am I because we all have moments when we change. I think it's best to focus on how you want to treat others and what kind of things you are interested in. Don't focus on what others are doing or saying, but ask yourself what would I like to be. There really isn't a straight answer for these things but know if you ever reach a point where you don't like yourself you can always take a step back in your mind and turn away from whatever it is that you don't want to be involved in. lol don't know if this helped or not and sorry it's kinda long.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

Haha, thanks Peace Keeper. This did help, even if I have heard it more than I should. I don't really.. read more
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

haha you're welcome...it doesn't hurt to remind ourselves sometimes never know when we need to hear .. read more

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