Dying Dove

I started writing this book and I'm really getting into it. I decided to post it while I write it, and it would be nice for y'all to help me with it. So please? By the way, I don't own the picture, it's not my artwork.
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BOOK DESCRIPTION:
Zia's the monster hunter in her family. She was recruited at the age of thirteen. Three years in the business has gone by, but Zia knew she shouldn't have gotten the distress call. In the middle of babysitting her younger siblings, she gets a call from her boss telling her to investigate a meteor shower that wasn't supposed to happen. She finds the supposed "falling stars" to be a group of Zarogins--the deadliest of monsters in the dimension. As a monster hunter, she knows to take them down and not get attached. After getting knocked out by one of them, she's abducted by the group. Zia knows she can't interact with them, or else she'll start to like them--which is illegal, especially for a monster hunter. In the group is a guy named Raider, who seems different from the rest. He hardly shows any signs of being a Zarogin, and yet he's with them. To Zia, he looks perfectly human; but looks can be deceiving. Zia starts falling for the supposed Zarogin, but knows she shouldn't. Is he really one of them? What would you do if you fell in love with a monster?