Is Now Over

My elegance,

Is falling apart

My beauty,

Is slowly fading

My intelligence,

Is dying quickly

My thought,

Is simply lost

My courage,

Is running away

My dream,

Is flying away

My wish,

Is disappearing now

My hope,

Is now gone

My love,

Is nowhere near

My will,

Is just dead

My life,

Is now over

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed it :) Please review and leave suggestions. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[heather]

I liked this alot! Sometimes this is how I feel... oh teenage years.. i'm right there with ya..

[Savior of Time]

Ha, thanks

-Willa

[Phillitup]

Hmmm, this was very intriguing and I definitely love the format. Nice work, as always!

[Savior of Time]

Thank ya, Philby!

-Willa

[Phillitup]

Of course! I added some writing (it's been forever since I have). I would love your honest opinion! :)

[Savior of Time]

Of course! As long as you message me on fb!

[Commanda Panda]

Here's my suggestion: STRANGLE EVERYONE WHO TRIES TO LEAVE YOU AND NONE OF THEM WILL GO ANYWHERE! I LOVE YOU! i think.

[Savior of Time]

Umm, couple things: one, im trying to be less violent; two, i dont know you.. but thanks for the review, i think?

-Willa

[Commanda Panda]

Definitely one of my magical drunk reviews.

[Savior of Time]

Okay then...

-Willa