Ups And Downs

I feel so many different emotions

I feel sad,

Feel like crying,

I think I'm out of my head,

And that I'm dying

I'm so happy,

Feeling up in the air,

No one could get me down,

Nor would they dare

I feel depressed,

Wishing to scream,

I wonder if I'm alone,

The only one tearing at the seams

I'm so delighted,

Jumping with joy,

It's like being on a Cloud 9,

That cannot be destroyed

I feel empty,

So hollow inside,

Everyone who's spoken to me,

Has only spoken lies

I'm so exhilarated,

Swept off my feet,

As if I cannot sit,

For I'm too high up for my seat

I am done,

With these ups and downs,

I love my happiness,

But I hate my frowns

Author's Note

I hope you liked it. Please leave suggestions and tips for my writing. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[HennaPenguin19]

It's really good, Willa! I can visualize what you're talking about, and I feel the same sometimes. One spelling issue: I think you meant "has" instead of "as" when you said "As only spoken lies". Otherwise, pretty much a perfect poem! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

[Savior of Time]

Ha, yeah I did! Thanks for telling me and for the review! Check out my other pieces?
-Willa

[HennaPenguin19]

Yeah, I will! Feel free to check out my work as soon as I actually post something! :)