Angry to the Bone..

Angry to the Bone..

A Poem by Savior of Time
"

I can't really explain...

"
I can't really explain,
I just feel the pain,
You leave this burden to me,
While I wish it would just flee,
Why can't you go away,
I see you day-by-day,
These days with you are nightmares,
And in my heart they're tears,
Hoping  you'll leave me be,
So why can't you just see,
You're tearing me open like a knife,
Killing me and my delicate life,
Though you may say I'm lovely,
You actually say it carelessly,
Not  caring about what it'll do,
To me or to you,
Now just leave me alone,
So I don't get angry to the bone..

© 2013 Savior of Time


Author's Note

Savior of Time
I made this for a "special someone". I hope y'all enjoyed! Please leave suggestions for me and review it! Thanks! :D

-Willa

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Great poem Willa! I totally feel for you here! Though there was this one line that went like this: "And in my heart they're tares." I'm pretty sure you meant to say tear, because a tare is a measurement to determine the net weight of goods. :P (Its used in physics haha). Anyway great job Willa~!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

yeah, i misspelled it.. x3 haha, I'm a bad speller :P thanks! :)

-Willa
Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

That's fine everyone's entitled. ;) :D



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Great poem Willa! I totally feel for you here! Though there was this one line that went like this: "And in my heart they're tares." I'm pretty sure you meant to say tear, because a tare is a measurement to determine the net weight of goods. :P (Its used in physics haha). Anyway great job Willa~!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

yeah, i misspelled it.. x3 haha, I'm a bad speller :P thanks! :)

-Willa
Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

That's fine everyone's entitled. ;) :D

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