Just A Dream

Just A Dream

A Poem by Savior of Time
"

Is it just a dream..?

"
The rain pours,
The pain flows,
Sadness eats me alive,
Blood's on my clothes

The sun shines,
The light of a new day,
Eyes are puffy,
Because of what you say

The school day starts,
The isolation begins again,
Poems being written,
All with my old quill pen

The thoughts run through my mind,
The thinking hurts my head,
Trying to lie down doesn't help,
Lay here uncomfortable in my bed

The feeling of uneasiness,
The strange shift in aura,
Something's not right here,
Run outside while putting on my fedora

The house you lived in is gone,
The happiness of you disappeared,
Confused and tortured, I am,
Tears on my face are smeared

The sobs and my cries,
The screams of sheer madness,
Going crazy, as it seems,
As I fall deeper into this darkness

The sudden awaken,
The coughs and then scream,
People all around me,
All of this was just a dream..

© 2013 Savior of Time


Author's Note

Savior of Time
Hope you liked. Finally able to write a rhyming poem again! :D Please review it! Thanks, y'all!
-Willa

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Wow! I was expecting a short poem like the ones you've been doing, but this was a really shocking and awesome surprise! Now to actually read it haha. One moment please.............................................okay aaand done. WOW. I was NOT expecting that...its awesome! "The sudden awaken, the coughs and scream, people all around me, all of this was just a dream." Very good last stanza! You're really a great writer, Willa!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

Oy! One day you will I promise it! >:3
Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

LOL, you sound like my bff Dell
Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

Haha well that Dell must be totally awesome then. 8)



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Wow! I was expecting a short poem like the ones you've been doing, but this was a really shocking and awesome surprise! Now to actually read it haha. One moment please.............................................okay aaand done. WOW. I was NOT expecting that...its awesome! "The sudden awaken, the coughs and scream, people all around me, all of this was just a dream." Very good last stanza! You're really a great writer, Willa!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

Oy! One day you will I promise it! >:3
Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

LOL, you sound like my bff Dell
Riley Bray

11 Years Ago

Haha well that Dell must be totally awesome then. 8)

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Added on April 27, 2013
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