Ying Yang

There's always a positive to a negative..

Time passes by,

But time stops,

Frozen in space,

But life goes on,

The trees are growing,

But their life has ended,

People are dying,

But their soul lives on,

No matter the negative,

There's always a positive,

No matter the ying,

There's always a yang,

Forget the past,

Look towards the future,

Forget the bad,

Look towards the good,

Remember the pain,

Then let it go,

Remember the sorrow,

Then let it go

Author's Note

Yes, it is supposed to be repetitive--that was kinda the whole point. Hope you enjoyed! Leave suggestions and tips for my writing and please review! Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Phillitup]

I like this...

[Savior of Time]

Thank you.

[TheMadnessWithin]

Your poem has a lot of truth to it, there is always a negative and a positive, i like how you rhymed the words and used physical things like trees in your descriptions, very good

[Savior of Time]

Thank you

[Trigorin]

Not bad. This has a highly lyrical quality which makes it nice to read, and your message is well grounded and accurate. There's a cyclical tone here too, which is nice because it's not seen that often. Well done.

[Savior of Time]

Thank you. Makes me feel like my writing is special--in a good way, of course.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I like the repetitive nature of the piece it guides the reader, well done, good read.

[Savior of Time]

Thank you!