You Don't Care

Why must you hurt everyone,

In your path?

No one did anything at all,

To you.

I guess you just like to bully,

Don't you?

You're ways of feeling happy,

Are extremely treturous.

Do you even understand,

All of our pain?

You are the only one,

Who gave us it.

Can't you just stop and think,

About your insane actions?

It seems like you will never figure out,

What you've done.

Won't you just stop and stare,

At all the pain you've caused?

You don't even care about anyone,

But yourself.

Would you treat anyone you care about,

Like this?

Well, you never have cared,

So you don't know love.

Why don't you be on the other end,

Of this bully magnet?

Maybe then one day you'll know,

The pain everyone else is feeling.

Author's Note

Spur of the moment when I was thinking about a school bully. This is for you, Justice. It's ironic that your name doesn't reflect anything about you. Hope y'all enjoyed my write. Please review and leave suggestions/tips for my writings. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Abby]

Another poem that is deep, and is very rough, yet it shows how you feel, and it makes a point about how the people who are causing so much of the pain should take a chance to look at what it is that they're doing instead of trying to make theirselves happy by causing more pain.

You did a marvelous job with this, and it definitely rang some bells with me since I was one of those kids who got bullied in school when I was younger.

Great write, Willa.

Abby:)

[Savior of Time]

Sometimes with my spurs, I just feel negative or positive emotion that I don't really realize what I write. Thank you for the review.
-Willa

[Abby]

That's how some of my best work comes out is just having a "spur," and writing whatever is in my emotions, and heart at that time. It may not make sense to me, but the meaning is not lost on someone else who does read it. :)

[Savior of Time]

Interesting. Thank you for sharing

[Abby]

No problem, Willa. :)