Questions and Statements

I am lost,

Can you find me?

I am blind,

Will you see for me?

I am emotionless, 

Can you give me feeling? 

I am deaf,

Will you talk to me?

I am sick,

Can you cure me?

I am dull,

Will you make me creative?

I am blue,

Can you make me bright colors?

I am depressed, 

Will you bring up my spirits? 

I am hurt,

Can you relinquish the pain?

I am dying,

Will you save me?

Author's Note

Spur of the moment before bed as usual. How'd you like it? Leave suggestions and tips for my writing please! Review my writing PLEEEEASE! Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Phillitup]

One thing. This says it's a story, probably a slip of the finger on your part. Nicely penned poem. This reminds me of someone. Hmm...I wonder who...:)

[Savior of Time]

Thanks:)

[LadyInk]

U really like how you did this one with the questions and all, my favourite would have to be the I am blue, can you make me bright colors part because its how I feel those words should be used. ( im a bit strange but...) all this to say, I love it!

[Savior of Time]

Haha, thanks! And trust me, it's not strange at all. Thanks again!