Long Road

I made this on the bus to my math competition today. I did pretty good :)

I'm on the long road,

Don't know where I'm going,

But it's mine.

This is my journey,

And I"m going to walk down it,

Take this adventure head on;

I'm not going to stop walking,

Until I reach the end.

There will be ups and downs,

Hills and straight parts,

But at least it is mine.

I don't care if I fall,

If I tumble down,

Or if it almost ends;

This is my long read,

And I will live it.

Author's Note

How'd you like it? Leave comments and tips for my writing. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Phillitup]

:)

Never better...:)

[Savior of Time]

Thanks :)

[LadyInk]

Its really good, just one thing, try not to repeat your words ;)
I think its amazing :D

[Savior of Time]

Eh, the repeating was kind of meant in it; I wrote it as a spur of the moment on the bus. Thanks.

[LadyInk]

Well it awesome!

[Savior of Time]

thanks