The Blank Page

I rewrite this so many times, I never know if I make it right.

I stare at the blank page,

Hoping to write something.

I look around my room,

So grey,

So dull,

So lifeless.

A single tear falls from my eye,

Sliding down my cheek.

Anger wells up inside me,

Why can't I write?

The pages are where you are supposed to let go,

Why can't I let it out?

Author's Note

What do you think? I know it's not great, so please give me tips and such.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

I'm always surprised about how much people down their own work. The only way to make it great is to accept it as your own. This poem is really good, I just wish you had the confidence to accept the fact that you wrote such a stunning piece. Less can be more. In this case, it is.

[Savior of Time]

Thanks so much, but I don't really know. I haven't shown much of my writings to people, so I wouldn't know if I'm "talented" or not. But anyway, thanks! :D

[Phillitup]

:)P

[angelface13]

Take it from Philbo...he knows what he's talking about!

[The Invisible Girl]

I love this one!! Very poetic and the words flow beautifully together shaping the emotion of the poem!! Great job! Keep it up! 100/100

[Ayvid N]

Perfect! Please keep it up! Thank you...

[Hawkmoon]

You must pay attention to the real world around you. Natalie Goldberg is a great writer who has written several books about Writing...

[Jocie]

This is quite good, U have amazing talent. U just need to think of what is in ur heart, what makes ur feelings, sad, mad, upset, angry. Just write how u feel. -Hope this helps-
~Jocie~

[Savior of Time]

Thank you! This helps me so much and relieves me of stress. "Just write how u feel", some of the best words of advice I've ever been given! Thank you!

[Jocie]

Glad I could help, any time.

[angelface13]

I thought this was very interesting. We all have times like this...but not all of us are creative enough to write about these times. I thought it was a very good way to make a head start. One suggestion I have is to put more of that five senses thing into it. Hear, smell, see, taste, etc. I thought you did a good job doing exactly that while talking about grey and dull. Very interesting way to see boredom and distress. Personifying emotions, etc. is a very interesting way to write:)

[Savior of Time]

Thanks so much! This really makes me think on how I can improve my writing. :)

[angelface13]

glad that I could help!
PS So glad that you have joined!

[Savior of Time]

Thanks! :)