Blue and Silver Roses

My name is Spire

My situation's dire

I am lost in the light

lost in the night

Don't know where to go

Who to be

What to do

I'm lost in this dark eternity

 

Blue and silver roses

Dancing all around me

Dancing in the night

Yet so lost in the light

 

My name is spire

situations dire

So lost in the night

So lost in the light

 

Blue and silver roses

dancing all around me

Won't you come and find me

I'm lost in this dark eternity

 

Blue and silver roses

they can't set me free

Fire is still burning

please set me free

Author's Note

It just kinda came to me and I put it on "paper"...so don't be to critical. ;D

Reviews

[Between the grey]

love the second stanza, such a deep, powerful read. I like this cause it's emotional. awesome write.

[Rene Velez]

It's a good poem, life can be a trial when planting your feet on society, going out into the world on your own, finding yourself and fitting in, stay in the light and do what you love.