A search to remember

An idea has been planted, and would like to know your thoughts

Half the world away, 

A traveller in the making, 

Bringing the sunshine with, 

To leave a lasting impression,

Happened to stumble across,

That smile and twinkle in an eye, 

But not a believer of fate, 

Just in the things we do make,

A little something extra caught my eye, 

Capturing attention one and all, 

With a few spoken words, you had caught, 

A young kiwi lass, unable to look away,

Said to be single and looking, 

Unsure of the sincerity of simple words, 

I couldn't bring myself to share, 

The name I was given at birth, 

This is me throwing the ball, 

and waiting for the chance to know,

The young lad with the twinkle, 

Located in the city of Dublin,

Maybe an admirer only to remain, 

Carrying what if's upon one's shoulders, 

Or friends a possibility, only one way to know, 

Is to follow the name I leave with you.

Author's Note

I am looking for a certain lad, and was going to send a verse a week as an admirer with my name on the very last card. He studied English in college and I am a poet, so thought it might be a cute way to reach out. Thoughts?

Reviews

[Shasha]

It was really impressive! Well done! It was beautiful! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well. A beautiful and tempting poem. I liked the positive feel and hope in the words. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[WillaDanvers]

Thank you v much! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.