Your Song

Your Song

A Poem by WillaDanvers
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A memory of mine

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Soft hands amongst the whispers of wind,

Riding on the tunes of your guitar,

Your voice a melody in the midst of storm,

Drifting down from the branch on which you sit,

 

Sunshine caressing my weary features,

Chirping birds a blessing to my broken soul,

Your graceful words, and soft notes,

Strolling around with timeless ease,

 

The world bustling around the three of us,

Not stopping to breathe in the butterflies,

Wind whipping at their coats with harsh words,

While loving us with calm breezes,

 

Our daring dreams slipping into reality,

Dreary and depressing realities falling back,

A lullaby leaving your untarnished lips,

Charming us, an innocent adventure,

 

Roots settled far below the ground we walk,

Fingers of leaves caressing the baby blue of sky,

Dancing to the music you weave,

Creating a lifetime of dreams forever bound,

 

Soft hands amongst the whispers of wind,

A lullaby cast by untainted lips,

Riding on the tunes of your melodious guitar,

Strolling around with timeless ease.


© 2017 WillaDanvers


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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Gentle flow of words allowed the reader to feel he thoughts and the emotions of your words. You create good places and left the reader with wishes and dreams. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Everything moves so beautifully through the rhythm and flow of your tender music. There is a sense of a gentle dance carrying your precious lives across the world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :D
Enchanting Willa you created something so gentle and emotional at the same time and the nostalgia of memories...Sunshine caressing my weary features,... my favorite line, says so much! Wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank you Hebe! :D
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Mel
I was touched when I read this. I could feel chills and emotion

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank you Mel 😁
Mel

7 Years Ago

Your welcome
This is a very beautiful poem. It gave me chills.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank You :D
Wonderful poem, lots of strong feelings put through. Good sense of rhythm too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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WillaDanvers

7 Years Ago

Thank You! :)

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WillaDanvers
WillaDanvers

Auckland, New Zealand



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I am a part time poet, who's words sometimes ring true but otherwise have only gathered information from music, stories or a singular feeling. Anything really. Enjoy the words, and leave a few kin.. more..

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