''Reflections''

''Reflections''

A Poem by Will Neill
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A poem about what makes us......us!

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'' Reflections''


Sometimes I just sit and think

Of morning rain

And sunshine silk

Of bumbling bee's just buzzing by

Of flowers that bloom

A baby's cry

Soft white clouds that drift along

Clear blue sea

A mocking bird song

A sweet caress on a moonlit night

Loving arms that hold so tight

Setting sun

Lonely Beach

Stars that we can never reach

Trees that give us air to breathe

In gods love we must believe

A tender kiss

A wave goodbye

An infants smile

And a lovers sigh

The first steps when we start

The pride we hold within our Hearts

Music that can make us weep

promises we could never keep

Friendships lost

And family ties

Heartache caused by wistful lies

Sickness that can take a life

Wars that kill

A loving Wife

A hand to hold when its time to go

All above makes us so

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Reflections by

Will Neill

2014



© 2014 Will Neill


Author's Note

Will Neill
I was taking a break from my novel writing and enjoying some time just staring out the window at the world....this is what happened. I hope you like it.
Will.

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A poem of reflection indeed… through your words I saw all those images pass, my memories within your words…. The flow for me was perfect, that is, I forgot I was reading… This is poetry, thank you

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Mark, many thanks I'm humbled.
Will
I don't like, I love it! It made me feel human. I could relate to every words you said, especially, in what I'm going through right now. It is realistic. It is uplifting. It is phenomenal. Thanks for the boost. Just what I was looking for!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Thanks Shane, I hope my words are a comfort.
Take Care man.
Will
Almost like couplets. This was centered and had a pleasing effect when I read it. Sometimes the best stuff surfaces when you are relaxed and enjoying what's around you. Nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Roarke.
Thank you for your kind review, I think you are right I think it is better to let it c.. read more
This is really nice. It flows like music, reminds me of God's gifts to us all. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Will, my mom was the original Valentine. She wrote poetry and stories for the Detroit News papers. .. read more
Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Kathie, Im pleased to make your aquaintense. I hope we can become good friends on W.C
Will
Valentine

9 Years Ago

Perhaps we will. Kathie
I love this poem. You really make your reader feel like they see what you're writing. You used descriptive vocabulary and it really works.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Dacac, My My! My poem seems to be popular to day, thank you for your kind words.
Will
DACAC

9 Years Ago

Anytime!
That's an interesting take on a mirror but not from the perspective of looking in a mirror, instead the reflective surface of a window. See what is around you and appreciate the beauty in the everyday that we so often take for granted. Very well done. I enjoyed this a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Thank you realm writer, I am glad you stopped by for a spell to read my simple poem.
Will
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

I haven't read enough and I will try to change that. I just bounce all over the place and there are .. read more
I love the way you took those reflections and allowed the reader to experience the beauty, the thought process, the deeper meaning, and the peace in that moment, that we should all stop and embrace... You wrote with such heart that it was extremely affecting. Everything was done brilliantly and beautifully--from the font choice, the phrasing, the rhyme, the flow, to the title-I loved it all. This is the first piece of yours that I have read and I thoroughly enjoyed; I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

April, Thank you for your kind words I am glad you enjoyed my humble writing.
Will
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

That I did. You are more than welcome, it was my pleasure.
Wonderful way of putting the beauty of nature into words, and you did it in a spectacular way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Cody,Thank you for your kind review.
Will
Tinker Kid

9 Years Ago

Yea no problem. The best deserves only thexbest
that was very wonderful those are the reflections of life and the images we can take through our journey..well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will Neill

10 Years Ago

Thank you Stars. Each Of us has their own defections. These were some of mine.
Take Care.
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A powerful communion of emotion and delicacy well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will Neill

10 Years Ago

Thomas, thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Will

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Will Neill
Will Neill

belfast, United Kingdom



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