I was taking a break from my novel writing and enjoying some time just staring out the window at the world....this is what happened. I hope you like it.
Will.
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A poem of reflection indeed… through your words I saw all those images pass, my memories within your words…. The flow for me was perfect, that is, I forgot I was reading… This is poetry, thank you
I don't like, I love it! It made me feel human. I could relate to every words you said, especially, in what I'm going through right now. It is realistic. It is uplifting. It is phenomenal. Thanks for the boost. Just what I was looking for!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks Shane, I hope my words are a comfort.
Take Care man.
Will
Almost like couplets. This was centered and had a pleasing effect when I read it. Sometimes the best stuff surfaces when you are relaxed and enjoying what's around you. Nice write.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Roarke.
Thank you for your kind review, I think you are right I think it is better to let it c.. read moreRoarke.
Thank you for your kind review, I think you are right I think it is better to let it come naturally.
Will
Will, my mom was the original Valentine. She wrote poetry and stories for the Detroit News papers. .. read moreWill, my mom was the original Valentine. She wrote poetry and stories for the Detroit News papers. Kathie
9 Years Ago
Kathie, Im pleased to make your aquaintense. I hope we can become good friends on W.C
Will
That's an interesting take on a mirror but not from the perspective of looking in a mirror, instead the reflective surface of a window. See what is around you and appreciate the beauty in the everyday that we so often take for granted. Very well done. I enjoyed this a lot.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you realm writer, I am glad you stopped by for a spell to read my simple poem.
Will
9 Years Ago
I haven't read enough and I will try to change that. I just bounce all over the place and there are .. read moreI haven't read enough and I will try to change that. I just bounce all over the place and there are so many place on here to go that it's hard for me to get around to all of them. But you are most welcome. It was my pleasure for sure.
I love the way you took those reflections and allowed the reader to experience the beauty, the thought process, the deeper meaning, and the peace in that moment, that we should all stop and embrace... You wrote with such heart that it was extremely affecting. Everything was done brilliantly and beautifully--from the font choice, the phrasing, the rhyme, the flow, to the title-I loved it all. This is the first piece of yours that I have read and I thoroughly enjoyed; I look forward to reading more of your work.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
April, Thank you for your kind words I am glad you enjoyed my humble writing.
Will
9 Years Ago
That I did. You are more than welcome, it was my pleasure.
that was very wonderful those are the reflections of life and the images we can take through our journey..well done
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Stars. Each Of us has their own defections. These were some of mine.
Take Care. read moreThank you Stars. Each Of us has their own defections. These were some of mine.
Take Care.
Will
Will Neill is an award winning Irish author, poet and amateur musician; Born in Belfast in the late fifties. Will has established himself as a prolific writer all over the world for both his prose and.. more..