'Icicle'

                                 ' Icicle'

                    A winters Poem by Will Neill

Silently Growing

Clear soft Water

Antique rain from frozen clouds

Clinging unevenly from every height

Glass fingers dripping slowly

Alive by darkness grace, comes the morning

Sunlight's Kiss, delicately melts a winters face

                             Will Neill

                               2013

Author's Note

A short winters poem.

Reviews

[Nicole Williams]

This is very beautifully penned, very simple, yet imaginative. I absolutely love it.

[Will Neill]

Kora, Thanks I am glad you liked it.
Will

[Kelly Scheppers]

I know your forte is writing short stories, but you really do poetry quite well! My very best to you, dear friend!

[Will Neill]

Kelly, Thank you so much for stopping by,I try my best-I'm working on more short story's at the moment so watch this space.
take care.
Will

[SyberRose]

I really like the lovely images Will...sunlight's kiss...beautifully penned as always...Rose:)

[Will Neill]

SyberRose, your kind words have made my day.
Thank You.
Will

[Samuel Dickens]

A great little ode to the icicle. Well done, Will. We may have quite a few of them in a short while, as a massive winter storm moves in.

[Will Neill]

Hey Sam, good to hear from you. I'm glad you liked this, it was just as it came out. Keep warm my friend.
Will

[Chris]

a mellow and visual toned piece.

[Will Neill]

Thanks Chris, I'm not suprised this got little attention-it may be is not to everyone's taste. I just wrote what I saw. Thanks again for the read.-try one of the story's you may enjoy them a bit more.
Will

[Chris]

This is a worth reading piece ...don't sell yourself so short - others will do it for free and in THIS economy we don't want to take their jobs away now do we?

[Will Neill]

Oh I have learned that for sure, Thanks.
Will

[Marie]

Quite lovely imagery, Will. If I ever saw an icycle, I'm sure it would look like this.

[Will Neill]

Thank's Marie, Glad you liked it.
Will