'Pumpkin Head'

A short poem for the halloween season. Its just a bit of fun.Nothing serious.

' Pumpkin Head'

I like to kiss you when you sleep

I like to take little things to keep

An earring,sock or snip of hair

You'll never know just when and where

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I like to move things that’s how I play

I come alive when you're away

I'll breathe your name when you sit alone

And stand behind when you're on the phone

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I'll touch your hair when I feel brave

cos, I'm the one who walks across your grave

So do you know who's in your head

I'm the monster who lives under the bed

Copyright © Will Neill, 2013

'A little poem for Halloween-------Will Neill

Author's Note

A short poem for the Halloween season

Reviews

[Rachelle]

I can see Maurice Sendak's illustrations here.... a sequel to "Where the Wild Things Are".

[Will Neill]

Sweet, thank you for your kind review, Iwill stop over and have a look at some of your work.
Take Care.
Will

[David Scott]

HA. Creepy indeed. I'll check before I go to bed tonight.
That must be where my hair is going... :)

[Will Neill]

Thanks David, The hat looks great.
Will

[David Scott]

It is a bit silly... Wishing I could ride my horse. ha.

[Will Neill]

We all want to be cowboys-and thats ok.
Will

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Spooky and just a bit naughty, love it! Perfect for the season.

[Will Neill]

Sharon, I see you are ready for xmas-thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Will

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

You're welcome! Last year's pic, should probably update it!

[emmajoy]

I so like the teasing spookiness of what seems to be a neat, formatted phrases. But, you've managed to combine the Hallowe'en theme and just a touch of naughtiness. Fun!

[Tennessee]

Nice. I love Halloween as much as I can and this is awesome. I can just picture a brown pumpkin doing this now.

[Will Neill]

Tennessee, thank you for your review.
Will

[Lydia Shutter]

Spooky and sensual...such a combo! This sort of monster is one most of us would not mind running into! Lydi**

[Will Neill]

lydi, thank you, nice monsters-mmm, not so sure.
Take Care
Will

[Great Aunt Astri]

This had me giggling. I will make sure I look under the bed tonight!

[Will Neill]

Thank you Aunt, like I said, just some fun nothing serious.
Will

[Great Aunt Astri]

Just serious fun!

[Marie]

All under-the-bed monsters should be so nice...

[Will Neill]

Marie, Scarey monsters are much better to write about. Thank you.
Will

[Yellow Butterfly]

You sure know how to make the hairs on the back of my neck stand up...

Great poem for Halloween Will..

YB

[Will Neill]

YB I am so gald I scared you.
Will

[AYVID N]

The ending stumped me. It started romantically and then the twist. Great poem, bringing on a smile.

[Will Neill]

Divya, everyone who reads my storys knows there is nearly always a twist.
Thanks
Will