Forbidden Love

A love lost

  Forbidden Love

                             A Teardrop mist on an Autumn Moon

                                     A stolen kiss gone to soon

                                 A sweet caress that longs to last

                           Leaves memories dear of a time that’s past

Will Neill.

Author's Note

poetry is not my usual style, but this jumped into my head so here it is for what it's worth. An old post revamped
Will

Reviews

[Angi]

Even though it is not your usual style, even though it is in few words, you speak volumes here. I can feel the longing for that time. She must have been beautiful. Angi~

[Will Neill]

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Will

[Traci]

This was beautiful Will. Perhaps not your forte but I hope you keep sharing these words when they jump into your head, you've captured images in such a way many can relate. Well done.

[Samuel Dickens]

I think poetry must serve your purposes much like it does me. With this poem, you're sense of sadness is real and even familiar. Not your forte, perhaps, but it's still outstanding.

[JenniferMarie]

beautiful. I know this feeling well. Well written.

[Will Neill]

Jennifer, thanks for the review, like I said poetry is not my forte, but I'm glad you liked it-I will read more of your work soon.
Will

[JenniferMarie]

You are poetic and you write these nice images. hope you keep writing poetry.

best regards,
Jennifer

[Will Neill]

once again,thanks Jennifer.
Will