Alone

There's something about silence
that makes me peacefully sigh.
But there's something about the crowds,
that just makes me wanna die.

But in the silence of myself,
I can find some peace.
Alone with just a pen and pad
I find my sweet release.

My thoughts begin to slow,
and it all falls into place.
My writing gives me shelter
like a hidden army base.

So thank you for the silence,
I appreciate the deed;
All alone when being alone
is all that I need.

Author's Note

The last two lines borrowed from the Avett Brothers song "The Perfect Space." Feedback appreciated as always

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

You have written a writer's anthem here, Will - Solitude is the perfect writing partner. Great rhythm to this one.

[Will]

I've never written anything major (or really good, for that matter) with people around. Usually it's when I'm all alone. Im sure most writers will agree. Thank you, Rita.

[ron]

Im going to show this to my girl friend. She cant understand how come I want to be just left alone. I get a good rhythm going and...RONNN, OMG i want to die...lol. This is a perfect discription of a write, at leats I think it is. I love this one.

[Will]

LOL. I hope this helps in explaining to your girlfriend, Ron. Glad you liked it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Writers need alone time. It's how we are

[Will]

Certainly. Thanks, Ricochet

[richom]

Excellent. Anyone who writes needs and cherishes solitude. "Alone with just a pen and pad I find my sweet release." Exactly the way I (and I suppose all writers) feel. Fine cadence and rhyme. Well done. Richard
(You might want to reconnect some and thing in the third line.)

[Will]

Precisely what I was going for. Thanks, Rich.
(And I fixed that line)

[Jay]

It's like looking in a mirror. I relate to your words so well.

I know I need not tell you this, but your timing and rhythm is right on. Given the subject, there are a number of forms and structures that can work well to deliver the message. And your chosen form works just fine.

"Alone" is a pleasantly warm cup of tea.

[Will]

I'm so glad you were able to relate, Jay. That's something I strive for as a writer. Thank you for reading and reviewing.