A Boy and His Doubts

I love her
I can't say why.
The feelings burn
And my heart cries out,
For her loving touch
That I long for.

~~~

You're a fool
I'll tell you why
She won't love you
Like you will love her
You're wasting time
Pining for her

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

We torture ourselves with inner dialogue like this. We would never be so negative to a friend... Very real, well done, Will.

[Will]

It really is the arguments with ourselves that get us more than anything else. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Rita

[Firestone Feinberg]

The title is perfect. There's the boy and then there are his doubts. An excellent inner conversation. David

[Will]

Thanks a lot, David.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah unfulfilled love. Is there any other kind. Fortunately there is

[Will]

It's finding it that's the hard part. Thanks for reading, BR

[Knightingale]

Love the separation here. Nice job depicting conflicting thoughts.

[Will]

Thank you kindly

[Knightingale]

My pleasure entirely. I'm new here and I've been enjoying the great stuff I've been able to read.

[Will]

You're gonna love most of what you find. Happy writing!