Something

What is something?

Life.
Beginning.
Contentment
Peace.
Happiness.
Love.
Everything.
Something?
Nothing.
Hate.
Sadness.
War.
Longing.
End.
Death.

Author's Note

Feedback appreciated as always.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

This is cool. I read over it several times and it gave me an idea for something. Thank you will

[Will]

Anytime, Ricochet. Thanks for reading.

[Careline]

Whoa whoa whoa! Remember when i said i didn't really care for these poems? Well, i just realized the polarity in every line and that makes me like it a whole lot more. Well played, my dear William!

[Will]

Haha there's more to it than what first meets the eye. Glad you noticed it and appreciated it.

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the simplicity, and the well-placed punctuation which adds the depth of meaning. Those really are the poles of Life & Death - we need to hold on to the contentment, peace, happiness and love! Nicely done, Will!

[Will]

I've had this idea swimming in my head for a while, and i only just put it down. I'm glad you appreciated the polarity of the words, and then punctuation I only put in after the fact because I thought it worked better. Thanks for reading! :)