She

I can't get her out of my head

She invades my every thought
An unwelcome guest

Her voice rings in my head
Like churchbells in the dead of night

Her face flashes through my mind
Mona Lisa blocking my view of life

Her laugh jingles in my ears
Laughing at my pain

I miss her with all my soul
And I shouldn't be so bitter

But I cannot fight it
The story just can't be over

But it is
She's not coming back

So I sit and wallow in my pain
And drown it in ink

Perhaps my bitterness will leave my thoughts
Perhaps so will she

Author's Note

It's rough. Feedback is greatly appreciated

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I could really feel the emotion in this Will

very good job I like it a lot

[Will]

Thanks, Sam. It means alot, thanks for reading :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I need to read and review more ... its been a while since I have been in a reviewing mood so I hope this is the start of that.

[Will]

Haha glad to hear that! Your mind comes up with so much great poetry, I figure you'd make a great reviewer too!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

yeah you'd think but more oft than not I'm speechless ... Im a terrible reviewer

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

but their are rare occasions where i touch upon brilliance lol (jk get it lol)

[Will]

Well it's nice to hear anything from you, Sam.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well thank you Will

[Firestone Feinberg]

Elegant and real. Sorrowful and true. Reality here. --David

[Will]

Thanks, David. My reality, at least.

[Will]

Anytime :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Wisdom and emotion beyond your years, but not, it seems, beyond your experience. Lovely - keep drowning the pain in ink.

[Will]

Thanks Rita; the pain runs out, but the ink never does

[Careline]

You'll get her again. I'm sure of it.

[Mary Christabel George]

Such a profound write of a boy deeply in Love with a girl.
Filled with lot of Love & Sorrow.........!