Fear

Today, my sister asked me what my greatest fear was. This is the answer to that question,

I fear being alone
I fear being alone in the cold
I fear being alone in the cold as I draw my last breath

Being alone frightens me
I need people by my side:
Friends to encourage me
Enemies to discourage me
A lover to warm me

Friends to keep me company
Enemies to try and drag me down
A lover to keep me sane

I fear being alone
I fear being alone in the cold
I fear being alone in the cold as I draw my last breath

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have written a heartfelt expression of your fear on being alone. I can truly relate to this piece... Nicely done!

[PurpleQuartz]

I love the repetition in this great poem!!

[Rashmi Kulal]

Indeed it all boils down to that - the fear of dying alone!

Nicely written! Keep writing! :)

[jamal]

Great work Will! i like how you broke it down,"Being alone frightens me
I need people by my side:
Friends to encourage me
Enemies to discourage me" you can overcome any fear you have, fear is there to show us also to that we are truly strong :)

keep writing

[Will]

Thanks alot, I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for reading!

[Firestone Feinberg]

excellent writing. you are quite amazing especcialy considering your young age. you will go far. --david

[Will]

That means quite a lot, and I appreciate you reading and reviewing, thank you.

[Careline]

You're never alone. Not if I can help it.
Unlike you, I am destined to be so, my dear.

[Will]

It's the fear that might kill me. Not the actual state

[Careline]

don't fear fear. it'll just make you more fearful. haha

[Mary Christabel George]

Well written & thought too.
Friends, Enemies and Love.
All three are needed in our life.
They show us all the colors of life.

[Will]

Indeed. Glad you liked it :)

[Mary Christabel George]

:)