love's vortex

Into the wind; blown

 Primal heart fire burns alone

Love's vortex complete 

Reviews

[N. Scott Cohen]

I really like the first two lines, but the word "vortex" just doesn't fit in with the flow of the rest of it. Most of the poem is based on soft sounds, but the "t" and "x" in "vortex" just really throw off the flow. A very interesting image though.