What a lovely poem! Who doesn't dream of being able to fly, and having someone to fly through the clouds and all over the world with? That would be amazing I'm sure. :) Great job with this!!
I have always wanted to fly, which is why those swing rides that they have at amusement parks hold such great appeal to me. I enjoyed your use of repetition at the beginning and end of each stanza, I felt it tied things together quite nicely. Well done.
Hell after reading this now I want to be able to fly! Love the imaginary that was displayed here, keep up the good work!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
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I enjoy writing dystopian, survival, and horror novels. I also like to write poetry and short stories about animals. Writing has always been a hobby of mine. I started writing stories about my dream l.. more..