I Thought I Would Do A Good Thing

I Thought I Would Do A Good Thing

A Poem by Destructive Impulse
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A humorously dark tale. Its supposed to have a happy light hearted mood.

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The worlds given me so much
I thought that id do it a favor
the world made it clear what i should do
And i hoped to solve all our problems

 

the idea came from nowhere
There wasn't any instigator
Just an epiphany and a revolution
I smiled since the answer was with me this entire time

 

I wanted to make everyone happy
And to please the people
So they would all rejoice
And never have to worry again

 

I went over to my chest
And opened it up
To find my still beating heart
Pumping like a drummers boy

 

I dug inside the chest
And found my instrument
Which would play the song of peace
With a thunderous boom

 

The skeletons would rise up
And leave their spots in the closet
And would bring the world understanding
With the boom of my instrument.

 

I smiled a happy smile
And marched to the tree on the hill
Intending to free myself
And make the world better

 

I thanked the people

And I thanked fate for bringing me here

The sky was blue and the birds joyfully chirped 

and the grass was a beautiful lime greed

 

I picked up some notes from the ground
And loaded them in my instrument
And with a loud thunderous boom
I made the world a better place

 

the gears began to turn

Steel met skin
Life met death
As pain met freedom

 

The gates opened up for me
And the people secretly cried tears of joy
For all their problems were gone
And the grass on the hill was stained red

© 2012 Destructive Impulse


Author's Note

Destructive Impulse
Hopefully you got what happened :D
I started out writing from experience but obviously im still here so ya

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This is probably my favorite thing of yours that I've read. Yeah. Just....fantastic job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Destructive Impulse

12 Years Ago

Gracias. Im glad you likeit

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 31, 2012
Tags: suicide, humor, death, depression

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